I've submitted two possible formats for pricing at the printer:

A- 24 page A5-size saddle-stitched booklet with color cover. The middle two sheets would be map pull-outs, one for the players and one for the referee.

B- 16 page A5-size saddle-stitched booklet, and two detached cover sheets (outside cover in color) plus a folded A3 sheet. The second cover sheet would be a double-sided map sheet, and the A3 sheet would be a player handout.

B will cost more, but it remains to be seen how much more. I like the idea of that format, but with a 16 page adventure there's only so much extravagance the project can afford I think.

The sections of the adventure:

Author's Notes
Referee Introduction
The Surface Area
Dungeon Level One
Dungeon Level Two
Cheat Sheet

The cheat sheet is a description of the internal logic of the adventure. The dungeon is basically set up by a guy intentionally screwing around with adventurers, and a lot of things that might seem random have in-game logic to them. Instead of cluttering the actual descriptions with these explanations, I've moved it all to its own section.

Maria will begin proofreading tomorrow, and she's already made a layout suggestion that has made my life much easier.